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ru_translateBolshaja prosba k kollegam perevodchikam posmotret text "otcheta o letnej praktike" na nalichie oshibok..Zaraneje spasibo!<lj-cut text="This letter is to confirm that Mrs Vera N has successfully fulfilled a summer research program from a period of 13.07-4.09 2005 at the Department of the Molecular Biology at the Zentralinstitut fur Seelische Gesundheit.
During this period she has shown herself as an extremely motivated, hard-working and fast-learning student.
She participated actively in all areas of research, held by the laboratory. She attended in a weekly Journal Clubs held in the Zentralinstitut fur Seelische Gesundheit as well as at the regular seminars held by the Mouse behavior Group.
She learnt following behavioral tests: Novel cage test, Forced swim test, Water emergency, Restrain stress, Tail suspension, Rat exposure
List of procedures: Sucrose test, Intraperitoneal injections, brain perfusions with parapharmaldegide in mice
We strongly believe that an experience obtained here will help Vera to pursue her educational and career goals.
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немного режет слух
Date: 2005-08-05 11:11 am (UTC)может лучше так?
She was an active participant..
or
She actively participated...
She attended weekly JC meetings, held.... as well as regular seminars.
She studied the following ... tests?
Или акцент на том что выучила?
pursue her educational objectives and career goals....
Re: немного режет слух
Date: 2005-08-05 12:01 pm (UTC)(in American English)
Date: 2005-08-05 12:06 pm (UTC)During this period she has shown herself to be an extremely-motivated, hard-working and fast-learning student.
She participated actively in all areas of research being conducted by the laboratory. She attended weekly Journal Clubs held in the Zentralinstitut fur Seelische Gesundheit as well as at the regular seminars held by the Mouse Behavior Group.
She mastered following behavioral tests: Novel cage test, Forced swim test, Water emergency, Restrain stress, Tail suspension, Rat exposure
List of procedures: Sucrose test, Intraperitoneal injections, brain perfusions with parapharmaldegide in mice
[In the above lists, the various tests should either have all first letters capitalized or no first letters capitalized. "Forced Swim Test" or "forced swim test".
We strongly believe that an experience obtained here will help Vera to pursue her educational and career goals.
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Re: (in American English)
Date: 2005-08-07 01:49 am (UTC)extremely-motivated -> better 'highly motivated'.
by the laboratory -> in the Depratment.
She attended a weekly Journal Club in the Central Institute for Mental Health as well as regular seminars of the Mouse Behavior Group.
Не уверен, но мне сдается, что
mastered THE following
believe that THE experience
Стилистически лучше
will help Vera in her future research.
Re: (in American English)
Date: 2005-08-07 06:15 pm (UTC)