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Dancing was the Gazda
Sweating heavy showers
They flooded lowlands
Had by his side dancing Shiva
Hail Thee, holy, holy /Heal ya/
Winter coming slowly
Potion one and only
Kiss me right into the brain
Dancing all day Gazda
Had his body heat’ im
Too little just one day
Too little simply ain’t enough
The soul could shiver sometimes
Missing Day --
Make it shiver!
You’re Missing Day!
Make it shiver!
Ain’t done with the dance, you Shiva!
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Date: 2005-08-05 01:51 pm (UTC)Tekst ne arhaichen, dlya poezii vpolne normal'no.
А этот? (последний) %)
Date: 2005-08-05 02:22 pm (UTC)Maja
Sowing in dreamtime my mother was
Sowing the day through the night
Sowing in midnight my mother was her dream
With the sap of Tyrlch herb
The sap of Tyrlych herb
So fertile
Am I having in these Heavens
Where leaves are emerald
Ursa Major upways
Ursa Minor downwards
Oh did you feel the fever
While staring high above?
Maja through the World cutting
Maja carrying salt – that’s it
This night let happen
There come wise people
My mother’s bosom
Dreams of the flood
The Earth divines God’s Cue
Out there, holy rescue
The crimson this religion
From snowhite body coming.
Re: А этот? (последний) %)
Date: 2005-08-05 02:27 pm (UTC)V tom je dyhe. Izmenenie poryadka podlejashego i skazyemogo vpolne standartno dlya poezii, po-moemy.
Tekst bolee ili menee ponyaten (vo vsyakom slychae kajdoe predlojeni v otdel'nosti, o chyom idyot rech' ya ne znayu).
Спасибо!
Date: 2005-08-05 02:33 pm (UTC)