[identity profile] annathefoodie.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] ru_translate
Всем привет! Никак не могут найти удовлетворяющий меня вариант второй части: Им и останусь! Чтобы осталась некоторая пафосность этих слов. 

Date: 2013-12-15 12:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karakal.livejournal.com
Вариант:
I am a Russian poet. And shall be.

Date: 2013-12-15 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karakal.livejournal.com
Тогда, возможно, пафоснее - forever (and shall forever be).

Date: 2013-12-15 12:16 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-12-15 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mikelina.livejournal.com
В оригинале, в таком случае, было бы "навсегда".

Date: 2013-12-15 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mikelina.livejournal.com
My point exactly :)

Date: 2013-12-15 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karakal.livejournal.com
Увы, все устроено иначе, чем ваше point, - и процесс перевода, и слово forever. :)
Уж не обижайтесь.

Date: 2013-12-15 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vagonka-man.livejournal.com
Может, "I hold my own!"?

Date: 2013-12-15 12:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samogon.livejournal.com
Y le estere hasta el fin.

Date: 2013-12-15 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 5x6.livejournal.com
Ich bin ein russischer Dichter and und so werde ich immer sein.

Date: 2013-12-15 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] labas.livejournal.com
Ich bin ein russischer Dichter und bleibe hier!

Date: 2013-12-15 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clittary-hilton.livejournal.com
Hier stehe ich und kann nicht anders!

Date: 2013-12-15 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 5x6.livejournal.com
I have a dream, ich kann nicht anders.

Date: 2013-12-15 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yatur.livejournal.com
הנני משורר רוסי וכך אשאר

Date: 2013-12-15 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samogon.livejournal.com
Йа, натюрлих!

Date: 2013-12-15 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] voleala.livejournal.com
Это что за язык?

Date: 2013-12-15 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samogon.livejournal.com
Суахили, блеа.

Date: 2013-12-15 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greenkrokodilla.livejournal.com
I am and will ever be a Russian poet
OR I am a Russian poet, and that I'll ever be
OR I'm a Russian poet, and a Russian poet I'll ever be.
(this last version sounds a bit better to me)


Edited Date: 2013-12-15 01:29 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-12-15 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 5x6.livejournal.com
I am a Russian poet, and it will stay this way.

Date: 2013-12-15 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yatur.livejournal.com
I am a Russian poet. And so will remain.

Date: 2013-12-15 05:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] weird-penguin.livejournal.com
Quote

...
The mission of the poet is just that – to give life (animar), in the exact sense of the word: to give soul. Because I am a true poet, and will remain so until my death, I will never stop flagellating myself with the disciplines, and never give up hope that someday my body will run with green or yellow blood. Anything is better than to remain seated in the window looking out on the same landscape. The light of any poet is contradiction. I haven’t tried to force my position on anyone – that would be unworthy of poetry. Poetry doesn't need skilled practitioners, she needs lovers, and she lays down brambles and shards of glass for the hands that search for her with love.

From a lecture entitled 'Imagination,Inspiration, Evasion,"
by Federico Garcia Lorca
Reconstructed and translated by Christopher Maurer from
newspaper accounts published between 1928 and 1930.

http://laingsociety.org/colloquia/artliterature/irrestiblebeauty.htm

Date: 2013-12-16 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss4gu.livejournal.com
А я бы перевела так:
I am a Russian poet. That's what I am.

Хоть и не передано вот это "останусь", но смысловая нагрузка понятна, мне кажется.

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