SOS!!!!!!!!! Срочно!!!!

[alena-kov.livejournal.com]

Люди, кто знает хорошо английский язык, помогите проверить переведенный с русского небольшой текст, а то, кажется, там много ошибок: I have known M. from 1999; I’m her teacher. To my opinion, M. is the most suitable person (подходящий человек) for this program, because of during period of our joint activity (нашей совместной деятельности) she shown herself from the best side, having an inquiring mind (проявив любознательность), interest to study, purposeful and clear intentions (четкие цели). So, to be interested (заинтересовавшись)in pedagogic of early development(раннего развития), M. beginning to visit seminars and she has an experience of work with children (as a nurse) now. At the same time, to be interested (имея интерес к) in foreign languages and geography, M. takes any opportunities (пользуется любой возможностью) to know something new in these fields of science. In particular, in 2002 she began to study Japanese and Chinese; and every summer M. is the member of expeditions, which are organized by our Faculty. This shows M. as an active, enthusiastic person. This is very comfortable person, who can hear the peoples well, and in business and scientific arguments she can stand upon her point of view. Wish to visit Japan she explains by interest (интересом к) to specific the way of life and the system of study in Japan. I consider, it’s useful for M. to introduce (познакомиться с этими аспектами непосредственно) with those aspects directly in Japan, and this, without doubt, will be positive for her Japanese and (...(осталось додумать)). Это что-то вроде рекомендательного письма, может кто знающий заодно(!) с исправлением ошибок и конструктивно покритикует - что лишнее, чего добавить? Thanks:) примечание: "М." - первая буква имени. так, для справки.

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Japan!

[enigmata.livejournal.com]

I have known M. since 1999. I have been her instructor. In my opinion, M. is a very suitable person for this program. While we have been working together, she has made an excellent impression. She has inquiring mind, an interest in learning, and purposeful and clear goals. She is interested in the pedagogy of early child development. She has attended seminars on this subject and has worked in child care. She is also interested in foreign languages and geography M. takes any opportunity to learn something new in these areas. In particular, in 2002 she began to study Japanese and Chinese. Every summer M. has been a member of expeditions organized by our Faculty. M. is an active, enthusiastic person. She gets along well with others. She can stand up for and support her own viewpoint in business and scientific discussions. She wants to visit Japan because of her interest in the Japanese way of life and system of education. I think that it would be most useful for M. to become acquainted with these aspects directly in Japan. Undoubtedly this will be good for her Japanese and her ability at cross-cultural communication.

Re: Japan!

[alena-kov.livejournal.com]

ох, хорошо-то как!!!
как Вы славно справились, оперативно и умело!
Очень, очень благодарна!!!

Re: Japan!

[mratner.livejournal.com]

Очень хорошо!

Только "an inquiring mind".

Re: Japan!

[enigmata.livejournal.com]

Да - "an inquiring mind".

P.

Re: Japan!

[alena-kov.livejournal.com]

точно-точно? то есть, "has an inquiring mind", yes?

Re: Japan!

[mratner.livejournal.com]

Yep.